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Monday, July 17, 2017

Immortal Descent to Publish Spring of 2018!

Greetings Friends!

Though this is no longer my primary blog, I have some faithful followers on here, whom I still want to extend some great news to! 

So here's the news... *drumroll* ... my debut novel, Immortal Descent has been picked up by a publisher and will be in print this coming Spring 2018! That's right! It will be available in stores and online. There will be some exciting events coming up as we near the launch, so you don't want to miss it! 

I am currently building my readership list so if you would like to stay in the loop for a chance to win a free copy of the book, VIP giveaways, and more, please fill out the form linked below to get signed up! Thanks to everyone for their support and happy reading!



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Monday, April 3, 2017

Author's Webpage

Hi Loves!

Soon, I will be taking this page down and everything will be moved over to a wordpress page I've created. I still own the domain for my "official" author's page but until I get my first publishing deal in place and things pick up for me there, I'm going to conduct all things writing on my wordpress blog at: carolynmwalker.wordpress.com.

Thanks for everyone's support on Blogger!! :)






Thursday, April 21, 2016

Writer's Market 2016 - The Ultimate Guide to Publication!

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Hi peeps! Yesterday, I bought my first Writer's Market, deluxe edition! I am super excited for the amazing information within its pages. I intend to read it front to back and take in all the great resources and advice I can find. Anyone serious about publishing their work, be it articles for trade magazines, poetry, children's books, graphic novels, short story anthologies, nonfiction and fiction works alike, the Writer's Market has it all! There is even a nifty section with fresh listings on contests and awards of which you can enter.

The book begins with a letter from the editor, Robert Lee Brewer, and some very interesting and useful guidelines on how to properly use the Writer's Market. I suggest reading this before diving in. After that, you can thumb through at your leisure and see what catches your fancy, from literary agents looking for new talent to publishers who accept unsolicited manuscripts. I must say I have sold myself short over the years not looking into this golden gem sooner. 

The 2016 Writer's Market is in stores now at fine retailers like Barnes and Noble where I picked mine up. It can be pre-ordered for possibly less online as well (but beware of those tacked on shipping fees). With tax it ran me about $53 but the investment was well worth it. I intend on using every available resource this puppy has to offer. With this year's edition, you also get access for a whole year to their frequently updated database at writersmarket.com. You might also want to check out the Writer's Market Guide to Getting Published which serves as an additional companion to the official Writer's Market.

I am very much looking forward to sharing some exciting new news with you soon as I embark on my journey to publication!

Till next time. 



Thursday, December 3, 2015

LOL...How Funny are You?

carolyn m walker humorous textToday, I want to talk about a particularly funny topic: humorous writing. Yes, it’s a thing and yes, it deserves all the respect of other types of professions. After all, who can’t use a good laugh from time to time? In fact, some of the most unforgettable ads and forms are copy are the ones that make us double over with delirious laughter. So the burning question is: how does one achieve it and is it something you can do?

It sure is! (Those with only “how did the chicken cross the road” jokes need not apply.) The key to truly maintaining success when writing a humorous piece is originality. If you don’t have that, well… [insert cricket sound here]. You get the point. So if you are concerned about it and want to add some LOLs or at the very least smiles to your copy, read on to see how it’s done.

I should just point out right now that I come from a long line of goofballs, therefore it’s kind of in my genes to be a goof. If you don’t score so high on the laugh-o-meter, not to worry! Humor comes in many forms, my friend.

Sarcasm


The dark comedy of the written language can often be attributed to some perfectly placed sarcasm. The beauty of sarcasm is you don’t have to throw buckets of it at your audience. A sliver of sarcasm here, a helping of irony there, a hint at mockery elsewhere and voila! You have yourself copy that’s been nicely spiced up with edge and yes even a laugh or two.

Puns


Word play at its finest is best found in a pun that leaves your audience still thinking about it long after they've read it. Suggesting two or more meanings, by spring boarding off words with multiple meanings is a common way to add in a good pun. Alliteration is sometimes added with a good pun as well, often for extra humor. The best thing about a pun is it can quickly spice up your copy and generate a good laugh almost immediately. Not to mention they are often downright clever and often very much appreciated.

Slapstick


Cheap shots and SNL style skit references are fair game here. This style of humor works best in story mode copy. Telling a tale that’s worth a few extra laughs? Slap-stick is excellent for this and it’s easier to achieve than you may think. The best thing about slap-stick is there really is no right or wrong. Bumbling foolishness and epic fails are all a part of life, right?

Niche



carolyn m walker niche writingDownright quirky and completely niche humor is not an easy thing to accomplish, I won’t lie. A few years back, I covered a travel column piece on the summer festivities at Disney World. It just so happened Epcot had a summer Flower Garden festival occurring during the Star Wars weekends. If you are catering to a group of Star-Wars enthusiasts who also happen to love gardening, you better come up with more than just a blip about greenery and "may the force be with you." Let’s just say creativity knows no bounds with niche-based humor. By the time I was done Darth Vader and flowers sounded like a rosy pair—puns very much intended! It was challenging but rewarding. The best thing about niche humor is that it is literally one of a kind, so you have more freedom to think outside the box and have fun with it.



Friday, November 6, 2015

Big Reads in a Small Town – The Minneola Schoolhouse Library

Earlier this week, I took some time to visit my neighborhood library, which is literally within walking distance from my home. The Minneola Schoolhouse Library is a wonderful landmark here in beautiful Lake County, Florida. Housed in a building that was built in the late 1800s, one cannot miss the timeless nostalgia of this old town monument. This historic property was originally a schoolhouse with two classrooms and a bell tower. Inside, you will find beautiful wood finished floors and original pictures of the schoolhouse from over 100 years ago.

In 1915, Lake County merged schools and eventually built a larger new elementary school in Clermont.  Minneola's original schoolhouse was then closed down and it was later converted into a private residence. The homeowners decided to make some additions to the building, including adding on an enclosed porch, a living space and kitchen. Some of these features were later removed to return the building back to its original appearance. 
 
 
Today, the public library offers a wonderful space where patrons can literally step back into the past and enjoy a piece of history alongside a good book. There is a full section solely devoted to children’s books, five fully equipped computer stations and free Wi-Fi available for the tech savvy visitors. I have spent many a mornings at the lovely Minneola Schoolhouse Library. If you are ever in the neighborhood, check out the Minneola Schoolhouse Library and their friendly staff.


The library has a Friends Group, Front Porch Book Club, frequent Family Story Times, and other wonderful seasonal events and happenings throughout the year. Also check out their lovely outside gated garden with additional shaded seating. Another favorite place of mine to enjoy a good book or work on writing mine!


 
 
 

Thursday, October 29, 2015

How Long is Too Long to be Working on Your Novel?


got time to write a novel? carolyn m. walkerYou're writing a novel. You've had the idea for some time now, maybe even let it stew for a little while before finally putting pen to paper. But now that you've started, it's taking you far longer than you planned. Does this sound like you? If so, you are not alone. At some point, I'm sure we've all wondered how long it should take a writer to finish a novel. I have heard that on average, the typical first time novelist takes anywhere from 2-5 years to complete a full length book. Of course there's going to be some give or take here.

So how long is too long?

I have been asked in the past how long it takes to write a novel and while I am a writer I cannot answer that fairly yet because I am still working on my first novel! A brief bit about my own experience...my story idea came to me in 2002. I worked on it part-time for 3 years, stopped completely for 3 more years and then picked it back up for another year, only to change the entire concept.

Fast forward 4 more years and a college degree later, my writing style had changed so much, I decided to start the entire project over. Today, I'm 3/4 of the way done and steadily moving. If you count the restart, I'd say I'm right around the 2 year mark. Will this be typical? I hope not! Did this help you in anyway to better understand your own writing timeline? Doubtful! This goes to show that everyone's pace is different. While there really is no definitive timeframe out there for completing a novel, fortunately there are ways to keep yourself moving at all times, instead of wondering why you are stuck in second gear!

Choose a Target Size for Your Novel

Many of us may not know how long our novel is going to be but the sooner you get an idea of it, the easier it will be to realistically pace yourself! In my case I knew my story was going to be epically long. Knowing this early on has helped me get a better handle on what to expect.

Novels typically range from between 50,000 and 100,000 words, dependent upon a whole plethora of variables (like genre, typesetting, book type, etc.). For mass-market paperbacks, 50,000 words will land you at about 200 pages, while 75,000 words are at about 300 pages. And we've all seen those massive door-stopper books that double as lovely paperweights. :)

Stay Focused

It sounds like a no-brainer but let me tell you, it is anything but! There are too many other elements in life that want to get in the way and destroy your pacing plan! Online, there are a dime a dozen of "quick writing courses" and "draft helper" tools designed to get you writing your full length novel in as little as 30 days. I say don't worry so much about being prolific to start--worry about writing, period.

Pace Yourself...Realistically

Only YOU know what will work best for you and the only way to discover this is to pace yourself realistically. If you are busy and can only drill out work for 30 minutes a day, do it. Work on it every day and devote a space of time only for your writing. Make it a habit and stick to it. Do what works and is attainable. Nothing will stop you quicker than setting a goal that you cannot keep up with.

Understand that "Prep and Pause" is Okay!


Writing a book entails a lot and there is far more to it than just writing the words! What about brainstorming, plot development and planning, character fleshing, and downright research? All that takes time and you know what? It's totally okay. I like to call these things "prep and pause" moments: Moments when I STOP writing and focus on what makes the writing work in the first place. These things are important and should be given time just like your actual writing. (And don't get me started on editing).

Even if you are staring at the wall, thinking about how to best kill off that final main villain, you are working. It's part of your creative process and it should not be cut out or rushed along. Prized bestselling author of The Hunger Games novels, Suzanne Collins once said: "Some days all I do is stare at the wall. That can be productive, too, if you’re working out character and plot problems."

The Takeaway

Whether you write 10 minutes a day or 8 hours a day, write slow and steadily or fast and furiously, keep chipping away at it. Keep moving and stay mindful of your progress. Eventually, you will have perfectly sculptured masterpiece you so desire.

Saturday, October 17, 2015

Contract Writing vs. Freelance Writing

Contract writer freelance writer carolyn m walker
So, I'm doing a lot more freelance writing these days than contract writing and while both things are writing jobs, it seems that a lot of folks might not realize the difference between the two. The thing about writing is that it is quite a versatile beast. Dependent upon what you write about and how often you desire to write, one is likely to work better for you than the other.

So what is the difference? While either type can be full-time or part-time work, the real difference is in where you work and for how long.

Contract Writing


Typically, contract writing is when you work with a company but you are not a part of their formal staff. Oftentimes, you might work physically within their office as an independent contractor (1099) and you may be paid on an hourly basis or salaried. These jobs are often for a specified length of time (3-month, 6-month, and 1-year are common ones) and it is often project-driven. If you finish the project within a specified time, your contract may end. If not, it may be extended. Hours may or may not be flexible and the pay is often higher because it is a contract position.

A few years back, I took a contract writing position for a large law full-service law firm and my workload was solely project-driven within a 6-month period. I also received an extension. When the work was completed, my contract ended. Contract positions are a great way to build your portfolio while gaining valuable in-house work experience.


Freelance Writing


For freelancers, the location of the job is the biggest difference. Just like contract writing, you are considered an independent contractor (1099) and you work for yourself, but oftentimes you will provide your writing services under more flexible terms. These jobs may be paid hourly but are more often paid by the project. Work may be for a specified length of time but a project with proposed deadlines is more common. Projects may be large or small.

Unlike most contract work, your services as a freelance writer may be utilized by a client over a longer period of time. Dependent on the relationship you build with your client(s), you may work on a variety of projects and with a variety of folks--be them companies, media liaisons, marketing firms, ad agencies, creative departments, etc.

Freelancers not only tend to work on their own terms, they also often work on their own turf, which means you are likely working right from home or remotely. In the last year, I have taken on several freelance gigs and enjoyed the freedom of managing my own schedule and working with a variety of great folks (lovely clients). With this freedom however, comes the responsibility of needing to stay proactive and focused. Freelance work is a great way to build your portfolio, network with others and build strong references for future work!

The Bottom Line


Yes, there is a difference! Writing come in many sizes, shapes and forms! Now it's up to you to distinguish and conquer! No matter what path you take in your writing career, know that there are endless opportunities out there. Make sure you explore several avenues, try things out, be open minded, and find what works best for you. Nothing is more rewarding than discovering what you love and do best, then going out and doing just that!




Thursday, October 8, 2015

Are Job Bidding Sites Really Worth It?

Writing job bids carolyn m walkerFreelance writers want to make money. We want that next big assignment, awesome client or well-paying gig. It's what we do! So you may have heard of bidding sites like Upwork (formerly Elance), Odesk, and other online freelance marketplaces. All of these sound like great resources, but is it really the best path?

As a freelance writer, I've done a lot and learned a lot over the years. From content mills, to independent service want ads, outsourcing, contract agreements, freelance gigs, copywriting work, and bidding, it seems I've done it all. Bid sites were particularly sticky for me. For writers who want to build a solid portfolio, further their career, and make serious money, I would not recommend it.


What are Job Bidding Sites?

If you step back and take a closer look, you'll notice that firms like media companies, ad agencies, and in-house agencies are not particularly posting jobs on these sites. Most of the folks on there are typically looking for the best copywriter at the cheapest rate. Add the fact that other writers are on there competing for that job and it's a recipe for disaster. 

Oftentimes, you have to lower your rates just to beat the next guy. Even then you may not even get the bid! Plus you've spent valuable time proposing your services to a job you may or may not get. Also, let us not forget that many of these sites may charge a "quote fee"  or "transaction fee" if you do get the job. Elance charges over 8% of your agreed upon fee payment.


Now What?

In my opinion it is best to market and promote yourself directly to prospective clients who are looking for quality copy, and are willing to pay you what it is worth. You don't want to market yourself to someone who is looking to get cheap copy for a cheap price. Now, not all clients on these sites may be doing this, but many people want that "best deal" and unfortunately that means other standards may have to be lowered, including how much money YOU make!



Wednesday, October 7, 2015

Food Kicks Makes a Debut

food kicks blog logo carolyn m walkerI've decided to do something I have been wanting to do forever...launch a foodie blog! Food Kicks is a blog all about food. I will share reviews, recipes, food hacks, and other great foodie news! The thought came to me years ago when I began recipe scrapbooking. I enjoyed collecting recipes and searching for new food hacks so much I said to myself I should make a foodie blog.

Nothing happened until I recently when I decided I should create my own place on the web where people could enjoy a variety of foodie related topics. So I decided I'd blog about it "for kicks." Thus Food Kicks was born! The page is still very new but I hope everyone will enjoy it and follow me to stay connected.


You can check it out HERE!





Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Water on Mars? Scientists are Hopeful

Water on Mars Carolyn M Walker
Photo courtesy Mars Reconnaissance orbiter/University of Arizona/JPL/NASA
Hi Everyone! It has been a while (far too long) since I've last posted. A combination of sharing the flu among family members and extra soccer practices will do that to you. (Okay, no more excuses!)
Something in the news today jolted me back into writer mode. The recent discovery of water on Mars!

It makes me think of the common phrases: "when pigs fly," or "when hell freezes over," but "when Mars has water," really? Hmmm. So now that I'm on the current events train, I might as well keep chugging along.

Mars. The red planet. The future planet. The planet portrayed with red clay mountains and eternally orange horizons. The dry planet. Or is it? NASA says that evidence of flowing water has been found on Mars, therefore there may be the possibility of life there as well-- perhaps even life for us there one day. Well, this is a jump from when we speculated if faces lived among the sand nearly 40 years ago.

A photo, taken over a small areas of the Cydonia region of Mars, on July 25, 1976, sparked controversy and fascination when NASA released the image, taken by the Viking 1 orbiter.

Face on Mars Carolyn M Walker
Photo courtesy NASA
Could evidence of water on Mars be yet another controversial phenomenon? Only time will tell. In the mean time I might be inspired to write a short story about life on Mars. Who knows, it might even include a few flying pigs. :)


Wednesday, September 9, 2015

5 Types of Writers. Which are You?

Types of Writers Carolyn M Walker
It's one thing to tell a person that you are a writer. But what about the kind of writer you are? I decided to do a little digging around and see what types of writers I could find out there. I've come up with the following five categories below. Most of the writers I came across seemed to fit into one of these categories or a combination of two or more. Here's a fun list of what I found out:


Type #1: The Literary Devotee:

This type of writer is the closest thing to a "born writer," leaving their mark as the most quintessential of writers. These folks tend to be very creative and imaginative, blending art and literature into one. These types of writers tend to primarily gravitate toward fiction writing. They are able to build worlds in their mind and an uncanny talent to breathe life into their characters with relative ease. They often work alone and are very possessive of their work. 


Type #2: The Entrepreneur:

This type of writer is extremely business minded. In fact, they view writing, all the way down to the physical act, as a necessary means to a greater end. These individuals tend to be very driven and straightforward, and analytical, often gravitating toward PR or Marketing with their savvy communication know-how. They also tend to be good critics and may be more prolific then their Literary Devotee counterpart. They are easily fascinated and have an innate desire to achieve. Writing is seen as a useful tool in the creation of projects--which Entrepreneurs do very well.


Type #3: The Eccentric:

These types of writers tend to be solitary and produce that more cutting edge, outside-the-box type works. They tend to be deep thinkers and have a unique and often memorable style that sets them apart from others and they tend to make a significant impact on others with their writing. These individuals tend to gravitate toward and epic stories, memoirs, or poetry, sharing their profound insights that challenge and stimulate readers.


Type #4: The Avenger:

Messages for the masses and delivering the truth to the people—that is the main objective of the avenger. Whether its an advocacy campaign, a call to action or an exposé, these writers are reporters of the trade. They tend to be opinionated and passionate, yet concise. These types of writes tend to gravitate toward journalism and newsworthy content. They thrive on energy and are often driven to share their reach out to people.


Type #5: The Optimist:

This type of writer is the one who has the gift of gab. They can word things just right and have a sort of "writing charisma" about them. These types of writers tend to gravitate toward non-fiction, educational content, or inspirational pieces designed to engage the reader. Their ability to pursue an audience is similar to the Entrepreneur and their message resonates well with the masses. These writers make great public speakers, social net-workers or life coaches.

Most days, I would consider myself a Literary Devotee because I am very creative and imaginative. Other days I feel more like an Eccentric, seeking to share my wisdom with others in an ekphrastic way. With writing, there are definitely plenty of avenues to travel down!

Which road(s) are yours?

Carolyn M Walker Write Wise



Tuesday, September 1, 2015

What's in a Picture? Google's New Look!

Google. The staple search engine. The term used to refer to how to find something. People have been using the term around the dinner table for years and kids today have grown up with that infamous little G floating around them since the cradle. Google is everywhere and if you aren't on the Google bandwagon, well you've been left behind.

Today, Google changes the face of their logo, going from the classic Times-new-Romanish default look to a sleeker, more Arial-inspired font. What's with the modern and more contemporary look? A change in times m'dear! Simpler seems to go further. The new logo sports the same simple color palette but with cleaner lines and less "flourish" than the older style.

Google new logo 2015
Google's New Look!


So you might be asking why Google has decided to do this now? Well they are no stranger to change. In fact, they have changed a lot over the past 17 years. Today, they like to call their updates a form of evolution. See more on Google's creative transformation here.

According to Google's official blog, they are introducing the new logo and identity family that reflects their versatility and the ability to utilize Google whenever and wherever you need it. They have also updated the Google logo and branding, "for a world of seamless computing across an endless number of devices and different kinds of inputs (such as tap, type and talk)."

Google logo icon 2015
Google's new multi-color icon!

Pretty exciting stuff right? I myself am a self-proclaimed Google-lover, so I am all for the positive change! It seems that the biggest take away from this change is in how the new look shows you how Google is working for you. It seems interaction and consistency are key. As you use Google across multiple platforms, you will never doubt that Google is with you. This is ever-present in the the replacement of the lower cased blue "g" that was Google's prior icon. Now it has been replaced with the four-color “G” to match the new logo.

In a word, Long Live Google!


Monday, August 24, 2015

Back to School... Yes Please!

Back to School Carolyn M Walker
For some, it has already started. For others, it's not for another week or so. However for me, today was the first day back to school for my daughter Amber! She was excited but I was ecstatic! As a writer, time alone to get work done is so important! And now I get to partake in the joys of quiet and uninterrupted time once again. Thank you Jesus! Not that I did not enjoy every moment of summertime with my young one but ahh.... do you hear that?

(insert long pause here)

Exactly! Enjoy the silence! Of course that doesn't mean I won't be blaring some of that Depeche Mode or Foster the People or Aretha Franklin or Luke Bryan as I write on (I enjoy a wide variety of music). For all my parents out there who have passed GO, collected $200 and sent their precious bundle(s) of joy off to school, give a shout out! 

I love to think of back-to-school time as a time to start a few new things of my own. I reflect on the year thus far, and bring things into perspective moving forward. It gives me some much needed clarity of mind before we get lost in the whirlwind of the holidays and end of year hurrahs. One of the things I like to do is make some writing goals for myself.

My writing goals for this fall are:
  • Finish my current fiction novel and begin the submission process.
  • Attend at least two writer's conferences.
  • Organize my stockpile of poetry (wouldn't mind submitting that either :P).
  • Networking with more great authors and writers. (I have met so many talented and wonderful folks so far!).

 If you have any new writing goals of your own, share below!



Friday, August 14, 2015

Amazing Books Worth Second Looks - Mark Z. Danielewski's "House of Leaves" and "The Familiar"

Recently, I heard about Mark Z. Danielewski's newest installment to his latest work The Familiar. Volume 1 released this past May and volume 2 is set to release in October. To say the least, Danielewski's work is nothing short of uniquely mind-blowing. In the past, Danielewski's work has been termed as a cutting edge form of art that cross the most progressive of literary thresholds.


Danielewski's Familiar Front Cover Carolyn M Walker
Danielewski's The Familiar - Volume 1

Danielewski's Familiar inside page Carolyn M Walker
A page from The Familiar - Volume 1


Danielewski has been categorized as a writer of ergodic literature and a major pioneer among postmodern sign-iconic literature. Known most notably for his work The House of Leaves, published in 2000, he uses his ability to breathe life into macabre and satirical style horror with poignantly gritty prose.

I first discovered Danielewski shortly after aptly falling in love with his sister Poe's 1995 debut album "Hello." There were references to the House of Leaves among eerie little audio "footnotes" located in the pregaps between some of  Poe's tracks. Her music is lulling, mesmerizing and addictive, the perfect companion to Danielewski's work. Her later album "Haunted" also offers more areas to explore and provides a better understanding of the novel The House of Leaves

Danielewski's House of Leaves Cover Carolyn M Walker
Danielewski's House of Leaves


Danielewski's House of Leaves Page Carolyn M Walker
A page from House of Leaves

I remember holding The House of Leaves in my hands and finding myself fascinated by the seemingly odd layout and jarring imagery of the words (or lack there of) on the pages. The story revolved around a house presumed to be haunted and the significant impacts it has on the characters in the story. To this day it has never been revealed why Danielewski decides to color the word house in blue throughout the book, but it is among the many strange fascinations that live within this masterpiece.

As for Danielewski's latest work, I am thrilled and excited to delve into The Familiar, Vol. 1 - A Rainy Day in May and the upcoming Vol. 2 - Into the Woods. Danielewski is planning on publishing 27 installments in all. It seems we have much more to look forward to from this cult classic author! :) 




Wednesday, August 12, 2015

What's in a Character... or Not?

Carolyn M Walker Characters
This morning during my "writing devotional" time (where I hop online and read new serials or web publications from up and coming authors), I found myself experiencing a strange happening. I read two different short stories, which were very different in terms of story line but very much the same in terms of something else: the characters.

I love reading the works of new authors or forthcoming writers like myself. I draw motivation, ideas and a sense of comradery from each piece. The experience is quite different for me, compared to when I read the works of the more seasoned or well known authors (which I very much love too). With these earlier pieces, I get to see rough drafts, early prints and raw ideas as they slowly come to life.

Among these up and comers, I noticed the characters were missing a proper introduction or didn't have one at all. It was interesting to see this happen back to back in both pieces. It was also enough to get me thinking. During my days as an editor for my university's literary magazine, I critiqued and evaluated endless piles of submitted works.  And when I say I saw it all, I mean I saw it all.

I'm talking about "what not to do" when describing or introducing your character and then "what NEVER to do" when describing or introducing your character. So I've decided to give my two sense on the best ways to breathe life into your characters so your readers can truly appreciate all that Captain Joe or Stealthy Sam the Assassin or Judy Blue the Housewife has to offer. No matter who your characters are, these tips are worth it. ;)


Understand Why Description is Important


The written word is a chance to share your greatest insights and personal knowledge with your reader. Doing so with a strong visual is necessary for the most effective and memorable experience. Unfortunately, so many times I see an excellent opportunity to engage with the reader through description either overlooked or squandered by the writer! On TV, viewers get the benefit of visuals abound but in the written world, the reader depends on the author to deliver strong visualization. Without it, it is nearly impossible to become immersed in a scene or interested in a character.


Describe With Creativity


As writers, we probably have a vivid picture of our characters in our minds. However, just because we do doesn't mean our readers will share in that same vision. We have to DESCRIBE it to them. It seems like a no-brainer but this brings me to the next point. HOW you describe a character is crucial as well. It's not as simple as:

She was 5'8" tall, with long curly red hair and brown eyes and she was very mean.
(This was an actual example of something I reviewed.)

Instead go for a more creative and unique description such as:

She was all legs, some would even say lanky. She watched them, her chestnut brown eyes and auburn curls blending in among the crowd. Her agenda was a dark one.

I'm telling you about the character, describing her and keeping momentum in the scene all at once. You don't have to do all these simultaneously, but this is a great way to say a lot in a short space, without boring your reader.


Go with More but Not too Much


Dependent upon the story, you may want to add more or less description. As above you may want to intertwine it with the story line (which I find best as opposed to stand-alone descriptions). I like to slip descriptions in almost without the reader noticing if possible. As a rule of thumb, I would say it is best to inform your readers with enough description to make the character memorable, yet not too much that the reader is overwhelmed with too many details about the character.


When do I Describe My Character?


When can be as important as what. In the first piece I read this morning, I didn't get a description of the main character until the story was half finished. By then I didn't care anymore. On the second piece, I never got one at all! It was just a young girl and nothing more!  Readers are savvy creatures, so it is important to describe the character sooner than later before they draw false opinions of their own or loose interest altogether.


Character descriptions are fun but they can be tricky if you aren't sure where you want to go with it. Before writing, I always flesh out my characters in advance. Try creating a "character profile" with pertinent tidbits about them. A more in depth option is to create a "character questionnaire" where you get to know your character more intimately as though you were interviewing them! You'd be surprised what you may learn!

Carolyn M. Walker

Friday, August 7, 2015

Are You a Night Owl or an Early Bird? What's Your Writing Preference?

Night Owl Early Bird WriterDo you prefer to write early in the morning/day or later in the evening? In the past, this question has come up a lot. I  find it really interesting how some folks tend to work early while others prefer the night life. Everyone is different as to when they prefer to write and why. I couldn't help but wonder what caused this.

So my question of the day is this: why do some of us gravitate toward the grand sunrise hours to tap into our creative muse while others prefer to howl at the moon while they pen their great works of art? Read on and see what I've discovered.

It turns out that your sleep patterns are actually genetically predetermined! So if you have family members before you who were early risers or late nighters, you could be taking after them. As we know, most things tend to occur during "normal business hours" (9 a.m. to 5 p.m.). So for those who are trying to get things done during these hours, regardless of when they rise from or fall into bed, sleep is going to become a factor.

Not surprisingly, sleep deprivation is a major driving factor in the different ways both early birds and night owls tend to act. Night owls in particular, often experience what is called "social jetlag" because even though they stay up late, they may need to get up relatively early in the morning. I know I do. As a work at home mom, life still calls and believe me, my 9-yr old does not wait.

According to researchers, Early birds tend to be more positive and social, compared to their night owl counterparts who are less optimistic and proactive. Due to fewer pathways in the night owl's brain for feel-good hormones like serotonin or dopamine to pass through, late-nighters tend to be more prone to depression and addiction (yikes). Coffee at 12 a.m. anyone? However, night owls tend to me more creative and have higher cognitive abilities than their early bird counterparts.

In the writing world, this brings forth a very interesting correlation. It would seem that those who get up earlier will be more prone to pounce on their work and will likely drill out more, perhaps quicker than the night owls. On the other hand night owls may have a tendency to produce more creative and cutting edge work than the early birds because who would be crazy enough to stay up late writing anyway, right?


I've been asked the question myself, and I must say I fall into the "night owl" category. The idea of getting up super early and drilling out something even remotely decent is slim to none. For me, I tend to write better in the evening hours. As a night owl, my day seems to be much shorter. I also have the lack of sleep factor to contend with. On the other hand, my sister who is also a writer, is the most devout early bird I have EVER known. We're talking 5 a.m. type early bird. So even though we are sisters, obviously there were both types in our immediate family.

Of course the traits of the early bird and night owl have exceptions, as with nearly everything in life. I'm sure there is a late night writer out there who loathes that "outrageously out of the box" style of creativity, while there is likely an early riser out there who moves at a snail's pace. No matter where you fall on the spectrum, it's interesting (and fortunate) that we are each unique to our craft, regardless of WHEN we decided to put pen to the paper or fingers to the keyboard.


additional source: ASAP Science 

Thursday, July 23, 2015

Scooby Dooby Doo, Where's the Truth?

Scooby Doo Mystery Machine Stories
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My daughter Amber and I love to sit back on a lazy weekend afternoon and watch old Scooby Doo Episodes on cable, Netflix or wherever we can snag a good mystery. It's one of the few cartoons from my childhood that I still love to this day. That makes it even more nostalgic that it is one of my daughter's favorite cartoons too. I have a sneaking suspicion that one day she will be curled up on the couch with her little one(s), riding the mystery machine down memory lane too. Ah, some things never change... or do they?

We love Scooby and that sentiment goes for both old and new installments of the beloved Hanna-Barbera original. But I've noticed quite a few changes over the years, and it's not just the different voice actors (Casey Kasem, rest his soulhe was epic). The stories changed. It didn't really occur to me in its entirety, until I was on the edge of my daughter's bed fruitlessly telling her all the reasons NOT to be afraid of the dark.

She lay, wrapped tightly in multiple layers of blankets like an overstuffed burrito.

"There's no need to be afraid sweetie," I said. (and we all know how well THAT one works...) "I promise it's nothing more than your imagination."

"But there's monsters in the—"

"No there's not! I'm telling you...it's just like on Scooby Doo when they find out at the end that the 'monster' was actually some guy with a mask and wig." It was then that I paused. That wasn't totally the truth. Not if you look at the more recent episodes and movies of Scooby Doo. As I sat there in silence, my daughter took the opportunity to throw in my face everything I had just thought about. It seemed there was more to this than I had originally thought.


In the 1998 film Scooby Doo on Zombie Island, both the lagoon zombies, and werecat descendants Lena and Simone Lenoir are of supernatural origin. No rational explanation is given, because there wasn't one!


Scooby Zombies Stories
Exhibit A: Undead Lagoonies
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Scooby Zombie Stories
Exhibit B: Werecats...apparently REAL ones
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In the 1999 film Scooby Doo! and the Witch's Ghost, acclaimed mystery writer Ben Ravencroft is literally sucked into a spell book along with the actual ghost of his ancestor Sarah Ravencroft, who turns out to be a witch!


Scooby Sarah Ravencroft pulls Ben in Book
Exhibit C: Into the book...see?
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There are numerous other examples, where supernatural instances like these go unchecked and unexplained. Mystery Incorporated, anyone? So this begs the question: why the change? Well, I think as a society deeply rooted in superstition and legend, it stands to reason that we would be fascinated with the notion of monsters being real. Now, more than ever we become lost in the romance of mystery and the thrill of the unknown. We openly allow ourselves to suspend disbelief and turn our attentions to the "what if's" of life.

Horrors have become more "real" and the unknown has become the norm. Just look at the slew of supernatural horror films flooding the market these days! I can't turn a corner without something pertaining to an exorcism, poltergeist, vampire or zombie staring me in the face! We fantasize about these vampires, build fan pages about the zombies and watch reality ghost hunter shows like it were the evening news. In short, consumers cannot get enough of the mystery train!

And children's shows are no exception. You don't just see it with Scooby Doo, you see it in the magic of Disney and among the superheroes of Marvel and DC Comics. In actuality, this isn't new but it is an ever-growing trend becoming more an more prominent among new generations who will usher in a new age of understanding and perception of well...everything!

So I looked down at my wide-eyed daughter buried under a mountain of blankets that would surely not save her from the proverbial boogeyman, and I was at a loss of words (and this doesn't happen often)! The monsters that lurked in the dark, lived in her mind and they were put there by the silent messages of entertainment that whisper, "guess what kiddo...it's real." So it seems the age of storytelling is ever-changing and more rapidly than ever as it reaches younger and younger audiences. Basically it's more acceptable to suspend disbelief and allow those monsters to be real, nowadays. Why explain it away with logic and practicality? Why keep it rational when it is so much more interesting to entertain that idea of "what if?" Just saying.